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همس الأزاهير
07-03-07, 09:52 PM
my teacher asked to answer this exercise..
that is ask to write paragraph in the middl..
I trayed to answer it..
can you tell me..
my answer true or wrong
..

when we moved into our new house Betty and I decided to decorate it ourselves. . I had never held apaint_brush in my life,but i was quite surewould be easy. we bought paint an brushesc it
. and were soon ready to start

when I held apaint_brush I was afraid to occur misstep because it was the first time I held apaint_brush. but when Betty reminded me of our ambition that we wanted to make house which will atract all people,I decided to overcome on this afraid. At the end we could to make attrative house ourselves.

The first thing I shall do tomorrow morning,said Betty will be to ring up adecorator to com and do the job properly I could not have agreed more.


thanks..

I wish for you all succes in your life

*لينا*
07-03-07, 10:45 PM
am not really that good in english ,,, i wish if i can help u
,,, lets wait for the others to help u

good luck:gg4mpup:

همس الأزاهير
08-03-07, 12:09 AM
Thanks lena..

I very happy for your participated...
..

baadysaad
08-03-07, 04:08 PM
First of all
Thank you for sharing with us your subject
The second thing that the title should be this way coz
True goes with false and right goes wrong

By the way it’s good paragraph

When we moved into our new house Betty and I decided to decorate it ourselves. I had never held paintbrush in my life, but I was quite sure would be easy. We bought paint and brushes and we were ready to start.



When I held paintbrush I was afraid to make a mistake because it was my first time I held paintbrush. But when Betty reminded me of our ambition that we wanted to make house which will attract all people, I decided to overcome my fear. At the end we could not make an attractive house ourselves.


The first thing I shall do tomorrow morning, said Betty will ring up a decorator to com and do the job properly. I could not have agreed more.

This is what comes up with me; any more questions please don’t hesitate

Regards,
B.S

سهول
08-03-07, 06:52 PM
when I held apaint_brush I was afraid to occur misstep because it was the first time I held apaint_brush. but when Betty reminded me of our ambition that we wanted to make house which will atract all people,I decided to overcome on this afraid. At the end we could to make attrative house ourselves.


When I held the paint brush I was afraid to make a mistake because It was my first time to hold one, but Betty reminded me of our ambition -to make an attractive house- I decided to overcome my fear and we made the house attractive ourselves.

I hope it's good and sorry if it's not...

همس الأزاهير
09-03-07, 12:39 AM
Thanks alot..


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my teachers

I wish for you happiness in your life.

سهول
09-03-07, 07:39 AM
Thanks alot..


baadysaad (http://www.qassimy.com/vb/member.php?u=77182)

&

suhool

my teachers

I wish for you happiness in your life.



You're almost welcome ..and I wish you happiness too...Good luck in all your lessons...

baadysaad
10-03-07, 07:20 PM
Thanks alot..


baadysaad (http://www.qassimy.com/vb/member.php?u=77182)

&

suhool

my teachers

I wish for you happiness in your life.



You are most welcome sister
and looking forward to see you again very soon

Good luck